Achhi shairi ke lawazimaat: Muslim Saleem

AchhI shairI ke liye zaroori hai ke shair parhta-likhta rahe. Khas taur se jab wo kisi khayal ko nazm kar raha ho to us ke baare mein zaroori maaloomat haasil kar le. Yeh is liye zaroori hai ke adab ke naqid aage chal kar kalaam ki dhajjiyaan udaa dete hain. Facebook ki wah wah waqti aur ghair aham hai. Yahann log be-wazn aur be-maana ashaar par bhi waah waah kar dete hain. Is se zyada khush naheen hona chahiye. Khud-ehtisaabi bhi zaroori hai. MUSLIM SALEEM

(MAIN NE APNI TIMELINE PAR POST KIYA THA. ISE PAR BAHUT ACHHE TABSIRE AUR MASHWARE AYE HAIN JIN KO SHAMIL KAR KEY MAIN “MOHABBAT PAR BHI POST KAR RAHA HOON TAAKE NAU-AMOZ SHURA KE KAAM AA SAKE)

Muslim Saleem
SHUKRIYA Aamir Riyaz AUR Tasleem Khan SAHIBAN,,,,,,NAU-AMOZ SHAIRON KO KUCCH AUR ZAROORI MASHWARON SE BHI NAWAZEN….FACEBOOK PAR AISE KACHCHE-PAKKE SHAIRON AUR SHAIRI KI BHAR-MAAR HAI.

Aamir Riyaz
Muslim sb durust farmaya aapne..Mujhe to un logon par shadeed hairat hoti hai jo Achchhi aur buri Shaayri par ek saath wah wah karte hain..Us se zyada ghazab wo log karte hain jo apne ghatiya sheron mein Ghalib aur Ahmad Faraz ka takhallus piro kar logon ko gumraah karte hain aur padhne waale aankh band karke uski taareef karte hain…Yahaan taareefen manipulate bhi ki jaati hain..

Muslim Saleem J
O SHAIR BAHR SE BE-BAHRA HAIN WO TAQTEE’ KE KAM SE KAM KOI EK KITAAB PARHEN. WO BHI MUMKIN NA HO TO APNE ASHAAR YA GHAZAL KO GUNGANAA KAR DEKH LEN KO DONON MISRON MEIN MUNSABAT HAI YA NAHEEN? MAIN NE DEKHA HAI KE KUCCH SHAIR “WAZN” KO “WAZAN” NAZM KAR…

Chandni Pandey
durust farmaya..Mas al khair..

Kamil Janetvi Bahut khubsurat mashwara hai . Kaash fbook par be bahr kalaam post karne wale ehbab is se sabaq len .

Muslim Saleem
YEH BHI TAY KARNA HOGA KE AAP URDU GHAZAL KE SHAIR HAIN YA HINDI GHAZAL KE. AGAR URDU GHAZAL KE SHAIR HAIN TO PHIR HINDI GHAZAL KI SHAIRI KO BHOOL JAYEN AUR MUKAMMAL TAUR PAR URDU SHAIRI KI LAWAZIMAT KA ILTIZAAM KAREN. KUCH LOG BASHIR BADR KE SHAGIRD HAIN. MAIN UNKA SHAGIRD NAHEEN HOON LEKI UNHON NE ALIGARH ME MUJH KO ARTS FACULTY SHOBA-URDU MEIN USTAD KI HAISEEYAT SE PARHAYA HAI. MUJHE UN KE IS BAAT PAR SAKHT IKHTILAAF HAI KE GHAZAL MEN SIRF AASAN (UNKA MATLAB HAI JE JINHEN JAAHIT TABQA SAMAJH SAKE) HI ISTEMAAL KARNE CHAAHIYEN. ISE TARAH SHAIR JAAHILON SE QAREEB AUR AAQILON SE DOOR HO JAATA HAI. ACCHE ALFAZ SE DOORI QAAIM KARKE WO ACCHHE KHAYALAAT SE BHI MAHROOM HO JAATA HAI KYONKE KHAYAAL AUR LAFZ KA CHOLI-DAMAN KA SAATH HAI. ISE LIYE ACCHE ALFAZ SE PARHEZ NA KAREN AUR SRF MUSHAIRON KI SHAIRI TAK KHUD KO MAHDOOD NA KAREN.

  • Hai yeh shu’ara ke liye ek mushfiqana Mashwara
    Mustaq haiN daad ke is ke liye Muslim Saleem

    Muttafiq hoN un se sad dar sad na kyoN ahl e nazar
    Fikr o fun se apne haiN Barqi woh funkar e azeem
  • Kamil Janetvi Bahut khubsurat mashwara hai . Kaash fbook par be bahr kalaam post karne wale ehbab is se sabaq len .
     
  • Kamil Janetvi Kitne log aise hain jo kisi ki fahrist-e-talaammuza men nahi hain . Unhe kisi ko apna ustad tasleem karte huye sharm aati hai aur fakhr se kahte hain hamara koi ustad nahi .
    Jab keh is ke bar aks un ke bahut ustad hote hain . Mukhtalif showra ko apni 2-2/4-4 ghazlen dikha kar baghair ustad ka shayir hone ka sharaf iasil karte hain .
     
    Sarfaraz Nawaz
    Kisi ne kya khoob kaha hai Jise dekho ghazal pahne huye hai Bahot sasta ye zewar ho gaya hai
     
    Haris Bilal aapki bat sey poori tarah mutafiq hun
     
    Syed Husnain sab se pahli bat to yeh hai ke khud men sher kahne ki fitri slahiyat ho , agar sher kahna aata hai to phir zaban ki jankari zaroori hai ,warna izhar mahdood ho jaiga ,mutala ke sath asri aagahi bhi zaroori hai aur mushheda bhi lazmi hai
     

    Mahtab Qadr آپ کےخیال کی تائید میں مسٹر دہلوی کا ایک قطعہ عرض ہے کہ ہو وہ اک مجموعہ ِ حسن بیاں ، حسن خیال ۔۔ خوبصورت شعر کی مسٹر یہی تعریف ہے ۔۔ اس میں سے کچھ بھی نہیں جب تمہارے بس کا روگ ۔۔ شعر کیوں کہتے ہو بھائی کیا کوئی تکلیف ہے

    Gul Khan durust farmaya aapne..aapki bat sey poori tarah mutafiq hun,,sir ji

Majeed Taj Baloch

Bahut umda. Sabaq aamoz tehreer hay. Aap no aamoz logoon ko ìtna kuch btatay aor samjhatay hain. Aap ke liye daad o tehseen haazir hai. Salaamath rehein sir

  • sir kyon ke main abhi shairi ke awaley se shagird hoon,,main aap ki bat se bilkul mutafiq hoon ke kalam main jo khyaal nazam kiya jaye uski ke bare main puri maaloomaat rakh leni chayii .. take aghar kalam ke awaley se nuqta uthaay tu us par maalomaat ke mutabiq jwaab de sake …is ke alwaa shayr par us paak o ba barkat zaat ka bahaa shukar,,,,be gharz mohabat karney waley qaareen ,,shayre koshish kare jo dukh dard ,hijar,wasal,,ke mosam masoos karta heh ,,who log bhi karein ,,,soch ka andaza aik aghar ho jaye tu pasand bhi aik ho jaye ghii……..bout bout shukrea sir good points.
     
    Muslim Saleem sir kyon ke main abhi shairi ke awaley se shagird hoon,,main aap ki bat se bilkul mutafiq hoon ke kalam main jo khyaal nazam kiya jaye uski ke bare main puri maaloomaat rakh leni chayii .. take aghar kalam ke awaley se nuqta uthaay tu us par maalomaat ke mutabiq jwaab de sake …is ke alwaa shayr par us paak o ba barkat zaat ka bahaa shukar,,,,be gharz mohabat karney waley qaareen ,,shayre koshish kare jo dukh dard ,hijar,wasal,,ke mosam masoos karta heh ,,who log bhi karein ,,,soch ka andaza aik aghar ho jaye tu pasand bhi aik ho jaye ghii…………..very good point indeed ……salamat rehein
     
    Mohd Aleemullah Khan Waqaar aap ki taleem Haq Hain
     
    • Tauqeer Zaidi Bahut Sahi Baat Kahi Hai Aapne Muslim Saleem sb
       
    • youngsters this one is not be ignored ,,its certainally a lesson worth remembering …………
    • Taimoor Malik As Salamo o Alaikum.sir muslim saleem shb min ny mukamal nasehAT parhi he.mujhy ik ik lafz bhot psand aya he,ap ki is nasehAT ka behad mashkor hun,hamin waqai qaiud line ki zrorAT he.min IN SHAA ALLAH ap ki hr naseehAT py amal krun ga.DUA kijy ga.
       
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About Muslim Saleem

Muslim Saleem (born 1950) is a great Urdu poet, writer and journalist and creator of massive directories of Urdu poets and writers on different blogs. These directories include 1. Urdu poets and writers of India part-1 2. . Urdu poets and writers of India part-II 3. Urdu poets and writers of World part-I 4. Urdu poets and writers of World part-II, 5. Urdu poets and writers of Madhya Pradesh, 6. Urdu poets and writers of Allahabad, 7. Urdu poets and writers of Shajahanpur, 8. Urdu poets and writers of Jammu-Kashmir and Kashmiri Origin, 9. Urdu poets and writers of Hyderabad, 10. Urdu poets and writers of Augrangabad, 11. Urdu poets and writers of Maharashtra 12. Urdu poets and writers of Tamil Nadu, 13, Urdu poets and writers of Karnataka 14. Urdu poets and writers of Gujarat, 15. Urdu poets and writers of Uttar Pradesh, 16. Urdu poets and writers of Canada, 17. Urdu poets and writers of Burhanpur, 18. Urdu poets and writers of West Bengal 19. Female Urdu poets and writers, 20. Hindu Naatgo Shuara etc. These directories can be seen on :- 1. www.khojkhabarnews.com 2, www.muslimsaleem.wordpress.com 3. www.urdunewsblog.wordpress.com, 4. www.khojkhabarnews.wordpress.com. 5. www.poetswritersofurdu.blogspot.in 6 www.muslimsaleem.blogspot.in 7. www.saleemwahid.blogspot.in (Life) Muslim Saleem was born in 1950 at Shahabad, Hardoi, Uttar Pradesh in India, brought up in Aligarh, and educated at Aligarh Muslim University. He is the son of the well-known Urdu poet Saleem Wahid Saleem. He has lived in Bhopal, India since 1979. (Education): Muslim Saleem studied right from class 1 to BA honours in AMU schools and University. He completed his primary education from AMU Primary School, Qazi Para Aligarh (Now converted into a girls school of AMU). He passed high school exam from AMU City School, Aligarh and B.A. Hons (Political Science) from Aligarh Muslim University Aligarh. Later, Muslim Saleem did M.A. in Arabic from Allahabad University during his stay in Allahabad. (Career) Muslim Saleem began his career as a journalist in the Urdu-language newspaper Aftab-e-Jadeed, Bhopal. He is multilingual journalist having worked on top posts with Dainik Bhaskar (Hindi), Central Chronicle (English), National Mail (English), News Express (English) and most recently as the chief copy editor of the Hindustan Times in Bhopal. At present, Muslim Saleem is English news advisor to Directorate of Public Relations, Government of Madhya Pradesh. (as on December 1, 2012). (Works and awards) Muslim Saleem has been appointed as Patron of Indo-Kuwait Friendship Society. He is the author of Aamad Aamad, a compilation of his poetry published by Madhya Pradesh Urdu Academi. Several of his couplets are well known in the Urdu language. He won the Yaad-e-Basit Tarhi Mushaira, a poetry competition, in 1982. In 1971, Muslim Saleem was awarded by Ismat Chughtai for his Afsana “Nangi Sadak Par” at AMU Aligarh. His ghazals and short stories have been published in Urdu-language publications Shair, Ahang, Asri, Adab, Agai, Naya Daur, Sada-e-Urdu, Nadeem and other periodicals and magazines. His work in service of the Urdu language was recognized in a special 2011 edition of the periodical Abadi Kiran, devoted to his work. Evenings in his honour have been organised in a number of cities. Muslim Saleem is currently compiling a massive database of poets and writers of the Urdu language, both historic and currently active. (Translation of Muslim Saleem’s work in English): Great scholar Dr. Shehzad Rizvi based in Washington has translated Muslim Saleem’s ghazal in English even though they have never met. Dr. Rizvi saw Muslim Saleem’s ghazals on websites and was so moved that he decided to translate them. (Praise by poets and writers) Great poet and scholar of Urdu and Persian Dr. Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi has also written a number of poetic tributes to Muslim Saleem. Dr. Azmi and Muslim Saleem are yet to meet face to face. Beside this, great short-story writer and critic Mehdi Jafar (Allahabad, Bashir Badr (Bhopal), Jafar Askari (Lucknow), Prof. Noorul Husnain (Aurangabad), Kazim Jaffrey (Lahore) and a host of others have written in-depth articles defining Muslim Saleem’s poetry. (Muslim Saleem on other websites) Muslim Saleem’s life and works have been mentioned on Wikipedia, www.urduadab4u.blogspot.in, www.urduyouthforum.org and several other website. In fact, www.urduyouthforum.org has given credit to Muslim Saleem for lifting a number of pictures and entries from Muslim Saleem’s websites and blogs. (Address): Muslim Saleem, 280 Khanugaon, VIP Road, Bhopal-462001 Mobiles: 0 9009217456 0 9893611323 Email: muslimsaleem@rediffmail.com saleemmuslim@yahoo.com Best couplets: Zindagi ki tarah bikhar jaayen…… kyun ham aise jiyen ki mar jaayen kar di meeras waarison ke sipurd…. zindagi kis ke naam mar jaayen rooh ke karb ka kuchh mudaawa no tha doctor neend ki goiyan likh gaya wo dekhne mein ab bhi tanawar darakht hai haalanke waqt khod chuka hai jaden tamam My Facebook url is http://en-gb.facebook.com/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664#!/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664?sk=info Other blogs http://urdupoetswriters.blogspot.com/ http://muslimspoetry.blogspot.com/ http://abdulahadfarhan.blogspot.com/ http://ataullahfaizan.blogspot.com/ http://hamaramp.blogspot.com/ http://madhyanews.blogspot.com/ http://cimirror.blogspot.com/
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