Zia Shahzad Shahzad’s poetic Muslim Saleem’s ghazal

’’ مبارک ہو، بہت عمدہ ، غزل اچھی کہی مسلم
بہت دن بعد ایسی شاعری میں نے پڑھی مسلم
غزل کا مصرعہ اولیٰ نیا ہے اور نرالا ہے
حقیقت مصرعہ ثانی میں کیسی ہے چھپی مسلم

‘‘ بھائی مسلم سلیم ! بہت ہی غضب کی شاعری ہے ، میں بہت متاثر ہوا ۔ ۔۔ اللہ کرے زور قلم اور ہو زیادہ

Mubarak ho, bahut umda, ghazal achhi kahi Muslim
Bahut din baad aisi shairi main nay parhi Muslim
Ghazal ka misara-e-oola naya hai aur nirala hai
Haqeeqt misra-e-saani main kaisi hai chhupi Muslim

Meri Ghazal mundarja zail hai
Muslim Saleem …….ghazal
KHUDA SAY MAANGNAY HAR IK TAMANNA SAATH LE AYAA
WO MASJID MAIN BHI JAB AAYA TO DUNIYA SAATH LE AYAA


WO KEHNE KO TO EK PAL THA MAGAR KYA SAATH LE AYAA
WO LAMHA USKI SAB YAADON KA SEHRA SAATH LE AYAA
BAHUT TAQDEER WAALA HAI MERAY ASHAAR KA QAARI
BAS IK GHOTA LAGAAYA AUR DARYA SAATH LE AYAA
NAYA KEHNA THAA MUSHKIL, SAB ZAMEENE PA-FATAADA THEEN
MAGAR MUSLIM THAA MUSLIM FIKR-E-TAAZA SAATH LE AYAA
YAHEE RAKHT-E-SAFAR KAAFI HAI MUSLIM RAAH-E-MANZIL MAIN
KHUDA KA SHUKR HAI WO SAATH APNA SAATH LE AYAA

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Zia Shahzad Shahzad ’’ مبارک ہو، بہت عمدہ ، غزل اچھی کہی مسلم
بہت دن بعد ایسی شاعری میں نے پڑھی مسلم

غزل کا مصرعہ اولیٰ نیا ہے اور نرالا ہے
کہ مصرعہ ثانی میں کیسی حقیقت ہے چھپی مسلم ‘‘ بھائی مسلم سلیم ! بہت ہی غضب کی شاعری ہے ، میں بہت متاثر ہوا ۔ ۔۔ اللہ کرے زور قلم اور ہو زیادہ ۔·

Ravi Thakur Bahut khub slim sahib

Ahmad Ali Khan subhanAllah…..Koozay mein Darya Bhar laane ke mutaraadif hai y, Qibla…………BAHUT TAQDEER WAALA HAI MERAY ASHAAR KA QAARI
BAS IK GHOTA LAGAAYA AUR DARYA SAATH LE AYAA

Ahmad Ali Khan Jazakallah…..y shair Ghazal ki Rooh ( Essence) hai Hazrat …….NAYA KEHNA THAA MUSHKIL, SAB ZAMEENE PA-FATAADA THEEN
MAGAR MUSLIM THAA MUSLIM FIKR-E-TAAZA SAATH LE AYAA

Ahmad Ali Khan Agar Aapke ” HUSN-E-MATLA ” ko kisi Aflaaki-Shaiy (Aamad) se ham ta’beer kare’n to mauzoo’n Surat banegi…….KHUDA SAY MAANGNAY HAR IK TAMANNA SAATH LE AYAA
WO MASJID MAIN BHI JAB AAYA TO DUNIYA SAATH LE AYAA….. Bela-shubha, aisay Ash’aar hame Ik Wajdaniyat ki Kaifiyat mein sharabor kar jate hain…!!!!!

Ziaul Haque Masha ALLAH Keya Baat hai Bahoot He Umdah Lajawaab

Mohammad Shoaib Nawab Wahhhhh….kya khoob kaha he . !

Kaamran Zia bahot zaberdast

Mohammad Shoaib Nawab Bada taqdeer wala he mere ash aar ka qari ! Bas ek ghota lagaya or dariya sath le aaya !….kya kehne sir ! !…

Wajid Ali Wah
Wah Muslim Saleem Sb,Allah ap kio zindagi dey…

Ibad Mohammad Khan bht bht khoob shandaar janab

Wajid Ali بڑا تقدیر والا ہے میرے اشعار کا قاری
بس ایک غوطہ لگایا اور دریا ساتھ لے آیا
نیا کہنا تھا مشکل سب زمینیںپا فتادہ تھیں
مگر مسلم تھا مسلم،فکر تازہ ساتھ لے آیا

Wajid Ali Kiya Baat Hey…

Ahmad Rais Siddiqi very good.thnx

Mahmood Pasha bhot khob

Syed Zia Rizvi Lajawab ghazal hai.

Azad Saghar wah wah bhot hi umda aor nafees kalam,, aabad rahen,,,

Muhammad Ali Mokashi Subhanallah Bht behtreeeeen

Shaukat Ali Naz Khoooooob

Malik Javed · Friends with Nini Muzaffar

Mashallah

Jameel UrRahman · 99 mutual friends

لاجواب مطلع ۔واہ

Khushi Abidi · Friends with Adeel Shamsi and 2 others

Waah. . .

Khushi Abidi ·

Moattar kr diya hai usny mere khana e dil ko. . . .
Wo kya aaya, wafaa ka ek jhonka saath ley aaya

Sher Bahadur Akhtar matla ta makta khoobsoorat, maanikhez ashaaron se muzaiyyan lajawab ghazal ki jitni bhi taarif ki jaye kam hogi,,kiya kehne mohtram muslim saleem sahab waah waaaah…………

Noor Mohammed Khan muslim sahab feeqar ki wajahat asan lafzoo m ho bahut khub

Khushi Abidi · Friends with Adeel Shamsi and 2 others

Great effort sir. . . & Efforts Never Die. . . ALLAH bless u ever. .

Saqib Harooni Muslim sahab ek betareen morassa ghazal ke liye mubarakbad qabool karen

Nepal Lumbini ·

Farooq Saudagar Bahut Haseen Ash’aar hai Sir

Gayas Pasha Jagirdar YAHEE RAKHT-E-SAFAR KAAFI HAI MUSLIM RAAH-E-MANZIL MAIN
KHUDA KA SHUKR HAI WO SAATH APNA SAATH LE AYAA
wah khub

Aamir Riyaz بہت عمدہ …مسلم سلیم بھائی …بہت رواں اور بامعنی غزل ہنے..واہ واہ

محمود ارشد وٹو bot Khoob

Nahid Ibrahim very lovely gazal of course …you have not only appreciated your readers magnificently but also admired your own ideas bravely ,willingly , truly and bravely …….excellent !!·

Mohammad Naseem Mashallah.

Irfan Ali bahut khoob…

August 19 at 12:03pm ·

Asif Ali Khan Kya baat hai …bohot khoob

Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi Main hooN Muslim Saleem ka maddah
Jin ki ghazleiN hai fikr o fun ka kamal

Bazm e Bhopal meiN haiN woh shamil
Jis ki raunaq hain ahl e fazl o kamal

Ravi Thakur Bahut khub slim sahab

Ahmad Ali Khan subhanAllah…..Koozay mein Darya Bhar laane ke mutaraadif hai y, Qibla…………BAHUT TAQDEER WAALA HAI MERAY ASHAAR KA QAARI
BAS IK GHOTA LAGAAYA AUR DARYA SAATH LE AYAA

Ahmad Ali Khan Jazakallah…..y shair Ghazal ki Rooh ( Essence) hai Hazrat …….NAYA KEHNA THAA MUSHKIL, SAB ZAMEENE PA-FATAADA THEEN
MAGAR MUSLIM THAA MUSLIM FIKR-E-TAAZA SAATH LE AYAA

Farooq Saudagar Fikro fann se muzaiyyan Ash’aar Lajawaab Sir

Ahmad Ali Khan Agar Aapke ” HUSN-E-MATLA ” ko kisi Aflaaki-Shaiy (Aamad) se ham ta’beer kare’n to mauzoo’n Surat banegi…….KHUDA SAY MAANGNAY HAR IK TAMANNA SAATH LE AYAA
WO MASJID MAIN BHI JAB AAYA TO DUNIYA SAATH LE AYAA….. Bela-shubha, aisay Ash’aar hame Ik Wajdaniyat ki Kaifiyat mein sharabor kar jate hain…!!!!!

Abdul Auwwal Sangrampur Itwa Beautiful

Abdul Auwwal Sangrampur Itwa وه كهنـﮯ كو تو اك ﭙل تها مـﮔـر كيا ساتهـ لـﮯ آيا
وه لمحه اسكى سب يادوﮟ كا صحرا ساتهـ لـﮯ آيا
(بهت خوب)

Ameer Hussain bout khob

Hanif Syed Jazakallah….!kia khoob Ghazal hai.

Yousuf Malik Nice line

Syed Masoom Ashraf KHUDA SAY MAANGNAY HAR IK TAMANNA SAATH LE AYAA
WO MASJID MAIN BHI JAB AAYA TO DUNIYA SAATH LE AYAA
WO KEHNE KO TO EK PAL THA MAGAR KYA SAATH LE AYAA
WO LAMHA USKI SAB YAADON KA SEHRA SAATH LE AYAA…waah, baht meaari peshkash

Syed Zia Rizvi Behtreen Ghazal hai.Har sher bohat xoob hai.

Aamir R Zubery kia khoob fikr e tazah…..waaah

Shahid Ali Khan · 2 mutual friends

VERY NICE.

Feroze Natique Khusro بہت خوب

Haris Bilal Muslim Saleem sir ap k kiya he kehney hain.
har khayaal ko saadgi sey baandh detey hain.
zer e nazar ghazal b kuch aesi hi hy.

Miriam Imran AWESOME.

Farhana Zaka Wah

Gulreza Naz Bohut taqdeer waala hai ,,,,,, bas ik ghota lagaya ,,,,, wah wh wah kiya baat hai ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Saleha Sayyad Bas ik ghota lagaaya aur DARYA saath le AYAA….wwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..

About Muslim Saleem

Muslim Saleem (born 1950) is a great Urdu poet, writer and journalist and creator of massive directories of Urdu poets and writers on different blogs. These directories include 1. Urdu poets and writers of India part-1 2. . Urdu poets and writers of India part-II 3. Urdu poets and writers of World part-I 4. Urdu poets and writers of World part-II, 5. Urdu poets and writers of Madhya Pradesh, 6. Urdu poets and writers of Allahabad, 7. Urdu poets and writers of Shajahanpur, 8. Urdu poets and writers of Jammu-Kashmir and Kashmiri Origin, 9. Urdu poets and writers of Hyderabad, 10. Urdu poets and writers of Augrangabad, 11. Urdu poets and writers of Maharashtra 12. Urdu poets and writers of Tamil Nadu, 13, Urdu poets and writers of Karnataka 14. Urdu poets and writers of Gujarat, 15. Urdu poets and writers of Uttar Pradesh, 16. Urdu poets and writers of Canada, 17. Urdu poets and writers of Burhanpur, 18. Urdu poets and writers of West Bengal 19. Female Urdu poets and writers, 20. Hindu Naatgo Shuara etc. These directories can be seen on :- 1. www.khojkhabarnews.com 2, www.muslimsaleem.wordpress.com 3. www.urdunewsblog.wordpress.com, 4. www.khojkhabarnews.wordpress.com. 5. www.poetswritersofurdu.blogspot.in 6 www.muslimsaleem.blogspot.in 7. www.saleemwahid.blogspot.in (Life) Muslim Saleem was born in 1950 at Shahabad, Hardoi, Uttar Pradesh in India, brought up in Aligarh, and educated at Aligarh Muslim University. He is the son of the well-known Urdu poet Saleem Wahid Saleem. He has lived in Bhopal, India since 1979. (Education): Muslim Saleem studied right from class 1 to BA honours in AMU schools and University. He completed his primary education from AMU Primary School, Qazi Para Aligarh (Now converted into a girls school of AMU). He passed high school exam from AMU City School, Aligarh and B.A. Hons (Political Science) from Aligarh Muslim University Aligarh. Later, Muslim Saleem did M.A. in Arabic from Allahabad University during his stay in Allahabad. (Career) Muslim Saleem began his career as a journalist in the Urdu-language newspaper Aftab-e-Jadeed, Bhopal. He is multilingual journalist having worked on top posts with Dainik Bhaskar (Hindi), Central Chronicle (English), National Mail (English), News Express (English) and most recently as the chief copy editor of the Hindustan Times in Bhopal. At present, Muslim Saleem is English news advisor to Directorate of Public Relations, Government of Madhya Pradesh. (as on December 1, 2012). (Works and awards) Muslim Saleem has been appointed as Patron of Indo-Kuwait Friendship Society. He is the author of Aamad Aamad, a compilation of his poetry published by Madhya Pradesh Urdu Academi. Several of his couplets are well known in the Urdu language. He won the Yaad-e-Basit Tarhi Mushaira, a poetry competition, in 1982. In 1971, Muslim Saleem was awarded by Ismat Chughtai for his Afsana “Nangi Sadak Par” at AMU Aligarh. His ghazals and short stories have been published in Urdu-language publications Shair, Ahang, Asri, Adab, Agai, Naya Daur, Sada-e-Urdu, Nadeem and other periodicals and magazines. His work in service of the Urdu language was recognized in a special 2011 edition of the periodical Abadi Kiran, devoted to his work. Evenings in his honour have been organised in a number of cities. Muslim Saleem is currently compiling a massive database of poets and writers of the Urdu language, both historic and currently active. (Translation of Muslim Saleem’s work in English): Great scholar Dr. Shehzad Rizvi based in Washington has translated Muslim Saleem’s ghazal in English even though they have never met. Dr. Rizvi saw Muslim Saleem’s ghazals on websites and was so moved that he decided to translate them. (Praise by poets and writers) Great poet and scholar of Urdu and Persian Dr. Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi has also written a number of poetic tributes to Muslim Saleem. Dr. Azmi and Muslim Saleem are yet to meet face to face. Beside this, great short-story writer and critic Mehdi Jafar (Allahabad, Bashir Badr (Bhopal), Jafar Askari (Lucknow), Prof. Noorul Husnain (Aurangabad), Kazim Jaffrey (Lahore) and a host of others have written in-depth articles defining Muslim Saleem’s poetry. (Muslim Saleem on other websites) Muslim Saleem’s life and works have been mentioned on Wikipedia, www.urduadab4u.blogspot.in, www.urduyouthforum.org and several other website. In fact, www.urduyouthforum.org has given credit to Muslim Saleem for lifting a number of pictures and entries from Muslim Saleem’s websites and blogs. (Address): Muslim Saleem, 280 Khanugaon, VIP Road, Bhopal-462001 Mobiles: 0 9009217456 0 9893611323 Email: muslimsaleem@rediffmail.com saleemmuslim@yahoo.com Best couplets: Zindagi ki tarah bikhar jaayen…… kyun ham aise jiyen ki mar jaayen kar di meeras waarison ke sipurd…. zindagi kis ke naam mar jaayen rooh ke karb ka kuchh mudaawa no tha doctor neend ki goiyan likh gaya wo dekhne mein ab bhi tanawar darakht hai haalanke waqt khod chuka hai jaden tamam My Facebook url is http://en-gb.facebook.com/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664#!/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664?sk=info Other blogs http://urdupoetswriters.blogspot.com/ http://muslimspoetry.blogspot.com/ http://abdulahadfarhan.blogspot.com/ http://ataullahfaizan.blogspot.com/ http://hamaramp.blogspot.com/ http://madhyanews.blogspot.com/ http://cimirror.blogspot.com/
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