Roma Rizvi – afsaana- “Rab Qabool Karey”

Ajj phir …ghar mein logon ki aamad ka silsila jaari tha..subah hi se loog aa a ke mubarakbad de rahey the…Baji Husana sab ki madaraat kar rahi thein aur saath hi.. pan bana bana ke khaye ja rahi thein…

Ramzan mein aik din baqi tha..lakin sab jaantey the,ke Ramzan mein kisi ka iss trah milna nahi hoga issi liye aksar khawateen  abhi se hi unn ko Umrah ki paishgi  mubark deiney a gaii thien…

Husna khala….sabqa Qila Lachman singh mein yaani Ravi town mein rehti hein…ham sab ki mulaqaat bhi kisi taqreeb mein hi ho jaati hai unn se…

un ke chahroon baitey mulk se bahar karobar karty hein..achey khasey kam-aoo hein..laikn..wo ab tak issi ellaqey mein muqeem hein….baitoon ke ghar bhi mujood hein lakin akbar khalo aur wo yahan hi rehna passand akartey hein..go ke charoon taraf ..below average hi keh lien logn ki rehaish hai…han ye faida unn ko yaqinan hai ke wo yahan aik …hakim ki trah hukumat karti hein sab un ka be intiha ehtiraam kartey hein…buzurgi apni jaggah lakin abb un ki hassiayat bhi sab se laak darja ziyadah hai…kabhi wo aur Akbar khalo bhi mehnat se apna ghar chalatey rahey the…abb mashaAllah ..ksis cheez ki koi kami nahi…

Baitey khud aien ya na aien har saal walideen ko ticket zaroor bhejtey hein..abb ye un ki marzi hai ke wo ramzan ka akhri ashra Makkah mein guzzartey hein….

“barri nazar e karam hai jee app pe uss Pak Parwardigaar ki…”  Saath baithi parroson ne lehak ke kaha..

wo muskuraii

“han dua hai app sab ki…”

“na jee na aisey koi nahi jata bulawey ke baghair ..” parrosan ne samosey ki traf haath barrhatey huye kaha…

“phir bhi mein yehi kahoon gi..sab uss Rab ki ata hai..” dill mein kush hotey huye bolien ..unn ko apni ye tareef buhat achi lag rahi thi…abb tasbeeh pe ungliyoon ki raftar bhi taiz ho gaii thi…

Sughra ne chaii maiz pe rakhty huye socha “kiya ham iss qabil nahi Ke Rasool Pak s.w ham ko bhi bulawa bhejien…”

wo kai saalon se yahan mulazim hai..hamesha hi dua ke liye kehti hai baji se jo ajj tak na qubool hui…

uss ko saari sunni hui naatien yaad agaien…

“jissey chaha dar pe bula liya jissey chaha apna bana liya…

ye barrey karam ke hein faisley ye barry naseeb ki baat hai..

“Bas dill chahta hai sabz Gunmbad se nazar na hataaoon….Masjid mein tu iss qadar dill lagta tha ke Fajjr ki gaii mein 10 bajey tak wahien baithii rehti sab ke liye dua karti hoon…Qaza namzien ada karti hoon..kiya shaan hai uss Nabi Pak s.w  ki Nagri ki..Khush-haali ka ehsaas rehta hai…”

Husna khala wajjd mein bolti chalien ja rahi thien…

“SubbbhaaaanAllah ….jabhi tu ….app Naik loog hein na baji..

issi liye har saal ka bulawa ho gaya ap ka…”

dosri khatoon bhala kion peechey rehtien…aik aur sataish ka jumla un ke munh se baramad hua..

Aur yahan khala ka ye alam ke alame bala mein hi puhanch gaii…thien…sab un se rukhsat ho chukey the….ab sirf Sughra aur khala aamney samney baithi thienn

…”Baji aik baat pochoon”…wo boli…”kiya Rasool Allah ko ham nahi yaad aatey…”

sachii bolon mein uss suhni sarkar ke dar pe jaaney ke liye buhat tarrapti hoon…app ko bhi kaha na ke Unn ko slam dijiye ga..kiya unn ko Qubool nahi ke mein unn ke dar pe kharrey ho ke ye salam khud unn ko bolon…”

uss ki ankhoon mein ansu the…

Arey nahi Sughra aisey nahi kehtey wo tu sunntey hein na…Tu ne yahan se kaha…Yaqeen kar puhanch gaii Unn Tak…” kahal ne tassali di

Per Baji hamarey halaat tu itney bhi nahii ke ghar ka farsh bhi pakka kara lien..Umrah zitarat Hajj..Buhaaat door ki baat hai..App nassebey wali hein jee..Manti hoon mein… Naik hein buhat Ibadat guzar bhi hein……Allah hayati de..”..wo jaldi se utth gaii…

Hussna khala kafi dair sochti rahien…

Sughra kahien masroof thi…aur wo uss ke dopatey ke palo mein janey kiya bandhney mein masroof thien…

uss ko aata dekh ke..jaldi se kamrey mein chup gaien…Sughra dopata sar pe le ke ja chuki thi….

Ajj kisi ne bhi nahi dekha na hi Mubarak baad ke liye koi ijtimaa tha..lakin wo aik naiki chori se kar gaien thien…..

“Rab Qubool Karey..”

About Muslim Saleem

Muslim Saleem (born 1950) is a great Urdu poet, writer and journalist and creator of massive directories of Urdu poets and writers on different blogs. These directories include 1. Urdu poets and writers of India part-1 2. . Urdu poets and writers of India part-II 3. Urdu poets and writers of World part-I 4. Urdu poets and writers of World part-II, 5. Urdu poets and writers of Madhya Pradesh, 6. Urdu poets and writers of Allahabad, 7. Urdu poets and writers of Shajahanpur, 8. Urdu poets and writers of Jammu-Kashmir and Kashmiri Origin, 9. Urdu poets and writers of Hyderabad, 10. Urdu poets and writers of Augrangabad, 11. Urdu poets and writers of Maharashtra 12. Urdu poets and writers of Tamil Nadu, 13, Urdu poets and writers of Karnataka 14. Urdu poets and writers of Gujarat, 15. Urdu poets and writers of Uttar Pradesh, 16. Urdu poets and writers of Canada, 17. Urdu poets and writers of Burhanpur, 18. Urdu poets and writers of West Bengal 19. Female Urdu poets and writers, 20. Hindu Naatgo Shuara etc. These directories can be seen on :- 1. www.khojkhabarnews.com 2, www.muslimsaleem.wordpress.com 3. www.urdunewsblog.wordpress.com, 4. www.khojkhabarnews.wordpress.com. 5. www.poetswritersofurdu.blogspot.in 6 www.muslimsaleem.blogspot.in 7. www.saleemwahid.blogspot.in (Life) Muslim Saleem was born in 1950 at Shahabad, Hardoi, Uttar Pradesh in India, brought up in Aligarh, and educated at Aligarh Muslim University. He is the son of the well-known Urdu poet Saleem Wahid Saleem. He has lived in Bhopal, India since 1979. (Education): Muslim Saleem studied right from class 1 to BA honours in AMU schools and University. He completed his primary education from AMU Primary School, Qazi Para Aligarh (Now converted into a girls school of AMU). He passed high school exam from AMU City School, Aligarh and B.A. Hons (Political Science) from Aligarh Muslim University Aligarh. Later, Muslim Saleem did M.A. in Arabic from Allahabad University during his stay in Allahabad. (Career) Muslim Saleem began his career as a journalist in the Urdu-language newspaper Aftab-e-Jadeed, Bhopal. He is multilingual journalist having worked on top posts with Dainik Bhaskar (Hindi), Central Chronicle (English), National Mail (English), News Express (English) and most recently as the chief copy editor of the Hindustan Times in Bhopal. At present, Muslim Saleem is English news advisor to Directorate of Public Relations, Government of Madhya Pradesh. (as on December 1, 2012). (Works and awards) Muslim Saleem has been appointed as Patron of Indo-Kuwait Friendship Society. He is the author of Aamad Aamad, a compilation of his poetry published by Madhya Pradesh Urdu Academi. Several of his couplets are well known in the Urdu language. He won the Yaad-e-Basit Tarhi Mushaira, a poetry competition, in 1982. In 1971, Muslim Saleem was awarded by Ismat Chughtai for his Afsana “Nangi Sadak Par” at AMU Aligarh. His ghazals and short stories have been published in Urdu-language publications Shair, Ahang, Asri, Adab, Agai, Naya Daur, Sada-e-Urdu, Nadeem and other periodicals and magazines. His work in service of the Urdu language was recognized in a special 2011 edition of the periodical Abadi Kiran, devoted to his work. Evenings in his honour have been organised in a number of cities. Muslim Saleem is currently compiling a massive database of poets and writers of the Urdu language, both historic and currently active. (Translation of Muslim Saleem’s work in English): Great scholar Dr. Shehzad Rizvi based in Washington has translated Muslim Saleem’s ghazal in English even though they have never met. Dr. Rizvi saw Muslim Saleem’s ghazals on websites and was so moved that he decided to translate them. (Praise by poets and writers) Great poet and scholar of Urdu and Persian Dr. Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi has also written a number of poetic tributes to Muslim Saleem. Dr. Azmi and Muslim Saleem are yet to meet face to face. Beside this, great short-story writer and critic Mehdi Jafar (Allahabad, Bashir Badr (Bhopal), Jafar Askari (Lucknow), Prof. Noorul Husnain (Aurangabad), Kazim Jaffrey (Lahore) and a host of others have written in-depth articles defining Muslim Saleem’s poetry. (Muslim Saleem on other websites) Muslim Saleem’s life and works have been mentioned on Wikipedia, www.urduadab4u.blogspot.in, www.urduyouthforum.org and several other website. In fact, www.urduyouthforum.org has given credit to Muslim Saleem for lifting a number of pictures and entries from Muslim Saleem’s websites and blogs. (Address): Muslim Saleem, 280 Khanugaon, VIP Road, Bhopal-462001 Mobiles: 0 9009217456 0 9893611323 Email: muslimsaleem@rediffmail.com saleemmuslim@yahoo.com Best couplets: Zindagi ki tarah bikhar jaayen…… kyun ham aise jiyen ki mar jaayen kar di meeras waarison ke sipurd…. zindagi kis ke naam mar jaayen rooh ke karb ka kuchh mudaawa no tha doctor neend ki goiyan likh gaya wo dekhne mein ab bhi tanawar darakht hai haalanke waqt khod chuka hai jaden tamam My Facebook url is http://en-gb.facebook.com/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664#!/pages/Muslim-Saleem/176636315722664?sk=info Other blogs http://urdupoetswriters.blogspot.com/ http://muslimspoetry.blogspot.com/ http://abdulahadfarhan.blogspot.com/ http://ataullahfaizan.blogspot.com/ http://hamaramp.blogspot.com/ http://madhyanews.blogspot.com/ http://cimirror.blogspot.com/
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